INCREDIBLE TRAILER!!! I was a fan of World of Horror for a long time, and seeing the animated trailer drop with a super faithful animation style to boot was amazing to see! The tension building up throughout the first half was amazing, and it was chillingly fitting to see the protagonists gradually more on the losing end in the latter half! This trailer brought to life exactly what I imagined playing through the game, and you did a great hype job selling the game!

This was a fun expansion on Noyemi's story! The test drive adds a lot of character and shows Noyemi's off in a way that builds up well to the race! The extra pages added to the race itself add some good tension to ramp up the climax too! Seeing Galaxy Man seethe a bit helps flavor his decision to use a cheap trick excellently. I also really adore the couple transitory panels just showing Galaxy Man quiet and distant from the reader. They hit well in the original to make his true self appear shallower than he's already depicted.

The pacing of this comic improved a lot with the added pages and reordered panels, but one thing that sticks out to me in this otherwise really polished product would be the movement of the climax. I actually feel that stating Galaxy Man's thrusters were opposing Noyemi's boost helped, because Noyemi's ship isn't shown to slow down, we're just shown that it's at a dead stop. That aside though, it's still clear just how she lost, that's just my small opinion. You still did great on this! Parfait comics rock!

I really like short comics like these that leave you hanging on the edge of what even happens next for the characters presented. I really enjoyed seeing that struggle Yae has between being annoyed at her family and trying to (or at least look like she does) care about them. It's fascinating to see how Ken doesn't seem to share that sentiment at all, and it was a really nice read. Your posing and inks read really well!

As for the warehouse interior, I think it's a good complement with how there's a minimal amount of tones being used on the characters. It's balanced really well by how the characters are in all white, and I don't think they stick out weird or anything. All in all, very good work!

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